Leonard, you are to be congratualted on you concern and desire to provide a meaningful first experience for the budding PA competition pilot. A difficult and time consuming task.
Asking us, current builders and fliers is a good step, but I wonder in todays world if we really have the answers. Let me illustrate. Most of us have been modeling most of our lives. In my case, I started with solid models when I was 7 or 8 years old. By the time I built my first real PA ship, I had countless Comet and Guillows rubber powered ships built flown and destroyed. I learned a lot about building from them and when I got into CL, none of the then available kits were daunting. Today, many of the newbys don't come from a background like that. They wouldn't know how to final shape a piece or select the best wood, etc.
As you know, I've had the good fortune of being able to draw up many of the plans for Brodak in the past. Time constraints don't allow me to do much of that at this time, but I did learn from John what is important on a set of plans. Show everything. Use lot's of isometric views that show how the sub-assemblies go together. If there's any possible place where some one might get confused, try and make it as clear as possible on the drawing. Build one from the plans and take careful notes, lot's of pictures, and write a good instructional book in as clear and concise way as possible. Try and imagine never building a plane before and cover every question. Now, coupled to the detailed plans, even should there be some confusion, the pictures should work with the written directions to show exactly what needs to be done.
Technical writting is an art itself, and a good writer can use words, as we use balsa, to create a clear meaningful explanation of the process. After writting a manual, set it aside for a few days, then go back and re-read it. Is it still clear and consise? If not re-do those portions until they are. Have someone else read it and listen to their suggestions.
My first full PA ship was also a Green Box Nobler. It was started by one of my flying buddies, but was too much for him to build at the time. I got it with the wing framed partially and a few pieces missing. Because of my previous experiences, there was no real problem with finishing it. It was until recently, my best ever PA ship.
John Miller